Update!

i like it cant wait to read more...

Wow I wonder whats going to happen and think in my own opinion fist will be thrown and hell could be broken lose,update soon.

i like it i just have one guestion is alex bi in this storie well you should continue

I can just tell this story is going to be raddical. Now, if you would just update you could make me sure!

Seems interesting. I'd like to see where this is going. I do recommend spell/grammar check, but you're off to a great start.