i had actually read this yesterday, but the site wouldnt let me review.

anyway, good as usual. Did you ever work in "Top 10 ways to make a better ohio" into one of the other fics? Hahaha, that'd be great to see Jack on a TV spot like Sue has done.

You really have this character down.

Solid work

Aaaaaaaaw he named his car & he has a conscience that sounds like Quinn & Rachel Aaaaaaaaaw. Why dose he have a taser?

Once again, much love. One thing: McClaine is Jack's car, right? Is there a story or some reasoning behind the name?

I liked Jack's easy relationship with his father. You can just tell by the dialouge that they're very close and it's refreshing.

I also like the almost forced truce when Jack and Puck find that the other isn't completely evil. And Jack's conscience being Quinn and Rachel? An awesome touch.

It's jabba the hut