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giotto08 4/13/12 . chapter 1
Well, it's a good start...

And about Abe Miyuki, have you read Super lovers ?

Well, I guess you've read since you spoke about relations with preteen.

Have you read any other work of Abe?

Personally I love Komatta Hoshi!

The plot and the character are very interesting.

Plus the drawings are great!

Hope to see the next chapter!

Bye
DEMONIC BLACKMAGIC 8/6/11 . chapter 1
Aw this is really cute! I like it so far! Can't wait to read more!
nameless 9/6/10 . chapter 1
I like the story :D

How Zero isn't so overpowering - love how you make him caring but still being stoic and only giving few expressions. kind of makes him 'special' - and Kaname is sooo cute *sigh*

And this innocent relationship... *_*

It's so sweet and I yearn to have more of this sweetness and possibilities that are hinted...

*hopes for attack-protect and maybe kidnapping or at least knightnapping(maybe not xD) and sooo much more*
my name is paper YAH 8/28/10 . chapter 1
uh oh. It is near-common knowledge that if someone narrows their eyes at a pair of people at the end of a chapter that something bad is going to happen later. Only in rare (VERY rare) occasions is the narrowing of eyes due to sight problems. And I'm guessing this person did not have eye problems...

Awesome so far! can't wait for more
Nineorchids 8/27/10 . chapter 1
I like the setting and the idea. I especially like the way Zero recognizes and deals with Kaname's concerns. I hope you add many many chapters :D
simply anonymous 8/15/10 . chapter 1
aww.. cute! i just love the idea of matches; i think it's nice to able to find your match by matching up marks (it's certainly more convenient if you can tell when your match is near). :3

thank-you LeaNicholaie for deciding not to turn zero into a cradle-robber. i don't hold it against people who do read that stuff; it just doesn't sit too well with me. DX

at any rate, i'll definitely be looking forward to reading more of your story! :D
SecretTenshi 8/12/10 . chapter 1
i really like the idea of this story i never read one like this before soo thanks ;) i wonder where it will end :)
BeautifulSimplicity 8/8/10 . chapter 1
Aww, lovely :3

Can't wait to hear the rest of the story.
Shinreigari 8/7/10 . chapter 1
Cute Glad that everything I want to know was already revealed X)
Love332 8/6/10 . chapter 1
Such a cute chapter!

Those stupid people think that Kaname brings the curses or dangers! That is so horrible!

Really happy that Zero is Kaname's match and Kaname will never be alone again!
irmina 8/6/10 . chapter 1
Very interesting story I really like it. The idea of having a mark as a guide to find your Match. I guess each couple has a unique mark which is different from other couples. I'm glad you don't make this to a shota, but please don't stop where Kaname is still young. Stop at least when Kaname is 18 so he can be together romantically with Zero. There is nothing wrong with 10-14 years age different. I have many friends whose spouse age difference is quite big. Look forward for your next chapter.
kanazerosukenaru 8/6/10 . chapter 1
i really liked this story. i did shed a few tear for poor little kana-chan, it made me sad that those idiots around him couldn't see past his mark.

I think a ten year difference is not a big deal in romance if zero is 28 when kaname is 18 then all is good right? in the mean time he can teach him to fight and do other stuff, but even if you don't do a romantic angle for later on, i think this will be a great fiction.

i'm glad you did not go the shouta way...i'm not into reading fics with molestation scenes...i do find it disturbing to see children being depicted in sexual ways...i won't ever read those types of fictions.
Fjohwhs 8/6/10 . chapter 1
who expected it.

JEEZ

its a kid.

what kind of people do you think we are?

No. ok quit the joking. xD

i like your story line so far

and i hope you update soon!

Bai
Hanamaru 8/6/10 . chapter 1
great plot line! not everything has to be "M" :)

Hana
Voyse 8/6/10 . chapter 1
I'm confused. Abe Miyuki as in the manga artist or is it something/someone else? I would like to know what it is that in influencing you! Clarification please.
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