|Reviews for Mysterious Disappearance of Ash Ketchum|
| DP 9/10/12 . chapter 1
hay mate i think you should contion with this like brock misty and the other go on thir jornry to do thir dreams come on contion
| nightelf37 8/11/11 . chapter 1
…I don't know what to say about this. I just feel so…dissatisfied.
| SkyGem 3/12/11 . chapter 1
omg, i want to know what happens next! update soon!
| AdventureWriter28 8/7/10 . chapter 1
| Y-ko 8/6/10 . chapter 1
That's a really awkward place to end it. I don't mean that in some kind of "ooh, a cliffhanger!" way, I mean it's like you had a thought, half-wrote it out, then thought "eh, whatever" and posted it before you finished. Very clever of you, to make the rest of the story so bad that the reader won't care when you cut it off without making a point.
| ultima-owner 8/6/10 . chapter 1
Darkrai is so mean