this is great! more!

I really like this story. Please keep writing!

I love your story so far. Please continue to write!

Awww, but Catie, wher's the rest? It's not bad. Umm, let's

see...proofreading would be really helpful. Heh...and sometimes

you lose me, to be honest, so that I'm not sure what exactly is

going on. But the ideas are interesting! I like it. So hurry up

and finish it!

Random Peasants are Rejoicing.

kt

Awww, but Catie, wher's the rest? It's not bad. Umm, let's

see...proofreading would be really helpful. Heh...and sometimes

you lose me, to be honest, so that I'm not sure what exactly is

going on. But the ideas are interesting! I like it. So hurry up

and finish it!

Random Peasants are Rejoicing.

kt

i like your sroey... keep up the good work!

A tad confusing, but as good as always.

i need more! i didnt really understand any of the stuff in the special preveiw! please write more

This is a really good story. A little cofusing, but good.

I can't wait for more! This is really good. Hurry up and update.

Hello! Sorry it took so long for me to review, my computer locked me out of the internet. Smashing job! Really naf. Hurry up and type! I love this story!

im a southerner (the only true ppl who can tell you the difference between a hissy-fit and a conniption) and its spelled conniption. trust me.

WHOA! dudley being humane? oh lord, i just felt Hell freeze over... pigs fly in the sky...!

Woah! Interesting story.

Post more ASAP please!

You managed to upload the same chapter twice. Good going