I really love this story so far. I really wanna finish it. Great job, keep going, and good luck! :)

Heyyy Ember!

I really like the first chapter! I waz suprised with the little twist(the kiss)haha. You are very descriptive and that's awesome! I love action so i thought it waz an amazing start. I could feel everything that the main character was experiencing!

It waz a little hard to read though. Sometimes I lost my spot and had to retrace my steps. It doesn't hav to do with ur writing but i would hav liked it even better if it waz double spaced or something :p

Gracie Blechl

OMG LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT JAZZZZZ!

WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER AND SEND IT TO ME :)))))))

LOVE U DEE 33

love it its awesome how did you think of this