Reviews for Heart of Gold
The Duelist of Dawn 12/17/10 . chapter 20
Very nice, got to read on one of the admins! I think its great that they are now identifying the heads of Team Rocket other than Giovanni. It's a bummer that they have photos of people whom they encounter, assassin type thing.

Awesome Chapter!
sideways992 12/16/10 . chapter 20
Cool dawn was appLy to Defaet Proton. And we saw a glispe of Celebi. I just realized that you forgot Kurt the pokeball maker in Azeleza town.I hope you get some mmore votes. Cant wait for the next chapter.
EpicStormMage 12/16/10 . chapter 20
wow

are you gonna show lyra in this ?
The Duelist of Dawn 12/16/10 . chapter 19
Dang, impressive battle but didn't like the outcome. Oh well, win some lose some. But I must say, Quilava did seem more powerful than the rest.
ScotSniper 12/16/10 . chapter 20
Sorry mate, but the special is broken into two parts one on Dawn and one on Brock.

Another interesting chapter, i did vote on your poll i think?
The Duelist of Dawn 12/16/10 . chapter 18
This almost reminds me of Jessie with Kiara using Ekans the way she did, and the battle was more of a challenge seeing a Kirlia up to battle.

Great Chapter, sorry for not reviewing for a while, got a lot of own stuff to work.
ScotSniper 12/10/10 . chapter 19
your personification of Silver is rather good, you could make him a more dislike-able character by focusing on his interactions with other characters and his actions towards them.
Hikari no Kishi 12/9/10 . chapter 19
Damn Silver! Annoying guy... good job on showing what a jerk he is. And a nice close battle too! Poor Monozu... great chapter as always!
The Geeky Spaz you Adore 12/5/10 . chapter 18
omg omg thanks sooo much for putting my character kiara on there im the one who asked u too put her on there and such but im on another acount and im wanting to write a pokemon story maybe could u message me i have something to ask of you
sideways992 12/5/10 . chapter 18
Azaming contest battle ans silver is going to be coming next. Kiara is a great character, hope you pick mine next.
Hikari no Kishi 12/4/10 . chapter 18
Yay! Go Dawn and Charmander! That was impressive!

I liked Kiara, you had me scared with the 'bird of prey' looks XD. All in all, a great contest chapter!
ScotSniper 12/4/10 . chapter 18
Scot: So, Silver is evil eh?

Rylte: Yay go Silver!
Hikari no Kishi 11/23/10 . chapter 17
Go Charlie! Yay! That was an impressive battle. I very much enjoyed it. Good to see Monozu doing some butt wooping.
The Duelist of Dawn 11/21/10 . chapter 17
Wow, I didn't expect Bugsy's second pokemon to be that one! And I figured Scyther would evolve before this battle, considering the timeline. Love the battles!
SydneyInWonderland 11/21/10 . chapter 17
Pretty nice, and very interesting!

Anyway, i think they'll see Silver sooner or later, who knows

anyway, good job!
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