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smut1956 9/29/10 . chapter 1
I love the continuation of this series, it seems very right that they are slowly but inevitably coming to realize this was the best decision and one they can live with and love with.

Fun to see the rest of the team discover the big secret, I especially love Flack's reactions.

Hope to read more in this A/U.

One small usage thing for you: it's "PERSONNEL" not personal when you are talking about the person that deals with work matters and files. Very common error and I hope you don't mind me pointing it out.

Thanks for sharing this.

T.
SMACkedHuddy 8/12/10 . chapter 1
I can't put into words how much I love this story!
Eryngrace94 8/10/10 . chapter 1
AWESOME. Please write more!
Hazmatt 8/8/10 . chapter 1
Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!
Smacked - for - life 8/8/10 . chapter 1
Really enjoyed readign this story, a very cute little one shot :)

Liked the idea, loved the way you wrote it and just LOVED reading it. The end scene was very cute, with Mac offering to change his name :) Loved the ending line of Mac's, great way to end it

Hope you write some more one shots soon!

x
lily moonlight 8/7/10 . chapter 1
Good evening :) Many thanks for posting this, I really enjoyed reading it again :) Thank you for the note. I'm sure you know that I like this a lot already, but there's no harm in telling you again :) And it's even better for appearances of two of my other favourite characters - Sid and Flack. The opening discussion is very great, I can just picture it, two strong and determined people trying to work things out.

Very funny how Stella tells Mac that he would accidentally follow her into the crime scene and her hiss at the driver that cuts in front of her, I love all those little details. Oh, I loved picturing that scene with Flack noticing the ring on Mac and his unthinking reply! Very like Mac to tell Hawkes where to go, and very like Stella of course to notice that and send him a glare. I love how you wrote Flack here, asking for details, and then being embarrassed a little. Loved the description of Hawkes as he questions her, and then Sid's subtlety that is not really so subtle. But I loved how you wrote him and the wisdom he gives even though he can't resist his curiosity (A bit like Missy I guess;))

I think the end was my favourite, I really liked how you wrote their ease with each other and the love they have, alongside all the little details of their home life. And i loved how you wrote how Stella comes to her decision to take the name of Taylor. As always, you leave me with a warm feeling after reading your stories. I really wish you did own the show!
Herrera 8/7/10 . chapter 1
What a lovely story! I could perfectly believe it, it sounds like they would act if they left for once their impulses free.

Did I say I adored it?

Thanks for sharing this treasure with us.

Paz
shineleia 8/7/10 . chapter 1
What a great and beautiful story ! i really like the way you describe Stella's feelings !

Merci !
rocksmacked 8/7/10 . chapter 1
beautiful! love it!
shawdoo 8/6/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful! You captured the characters perfectly. Loved it!
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