l like. Cat and dog. Haha. Totally. :)

YAY! .

Haha, I was so excited when I saw that there was a new chapter to this story. XD

You really are a beautiful writer, I love your analogies.

Will there be more? D

PLEEEEEEAAASE write more. *kitty eyes*

Oh, I hope you write more (: I like it so far :D Write moreeee! :D

Uh yes, please continue! x) l loved this. The food analogies is an amazing idea, and you did it really well. l really like this. A lot. And your English is pretty good.

It was really good! Your translation seemed perfect, so your hard work paid off I guess. I would love to read a sequel.

This was very good. Rich and beautiful. If you work hard at your English, I certainly can't ell (that's a compliment.) It came out very smooth and I encourage you to keep going.

Please continue :)

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS! XD

Please, please, please continue! It's freaking awesome!

And I'd really like to read some of your other stories. )

Yes, I noticed the not-so-perfect English, but it's pretty darn good.

Just a few small errors. )

But I love it, anyway. )

1. Woahh, your authors note at the end completely surprised me! Your English was absolutely flawless!

2. Ah, remus. You wrote him perfectly because we all know he would be off writing poetry about his angst and lust. Adorable!

3. Sirius sex and rock and roll. Your not the first to say it, but it still was cute in the story. And I loved how calling Remus "nerd" was basically a term of endearment(:

4. Loved the Adam and eve metaphor!

Write more please?

I'll be sure to review (: