Ungradable

Umm... I'll have to reread it a few times to get it... I think

oh, oh! i think i know! *waves hand wildly* is it the tom thing? my guess is it involves tom or trent somehow. am i right?

Damn, that was pretty good. It gave you a rather picturesque view into the torment that was passing through Jane's mind at the time.

A mediocre attempt at being poetic is better that no attempt at all.

Not much to say about such a short piece, except "nice work".

All we can do now is to wait for Fall to arrive...