i wonder if kelly will ever find out about jason's past

oh my. as cruel as it was to ruin his family's business like that i think jason made the right move! he's the only one who treats the pokmon as they should be: with love, espect and kindnees.

Your antagonists are all really shallow and generally easily defeated. There doesn't seem to be any reason for disabled people to be barred from competition. The prejudice seems excessive. Other than that, your story is fairly interesting. I wonder how you fill the remaining 32 chapters.

This is truly an amazing story. I can't believe I've never dropped a review for it the first time I read it.

The Eevee 8. Let's see: Eevee, Jolteon, Vaporeon, Flareon, Espeon, Umbreon, Leafeon, and Glaceon. Yep that's 8.

Wow! you must be part Espeon to think up something like that before Glaceon and Leafeon where discovered. LOL.

This is still a terrific story.

This is the best fic I've ever read. I wish there's a sequel.

wow...

that has to be one of the most incredible stories I've ever read!

What an awesome fic. Very well written. Well done dude.

WOW (faints froms all the excitment)

brillanit

This was the best pokemon story and one of the best fanfics I've ever read. [I hesitated to review for the sake of writing something more worthwhile, but oh well.] The only things that I didn't quite like about it were Jason's cliche-ish additude toward pokemon training and the fact that I was expecting an uplifting epilogue. But it was still incredible.

it the best pokemon story ever

I was reading Against All Odds, a great story btw, but when I got to Ch 40, the story cut off for some reason. Is there another place you've archived this story?

What the hell, though. The story's more interesting than ever before, with the suspenseful and romantic situations that the characters are involved in. Can hardly wait to see how it turns out!

Excellent beginning. It must've been one or two years since I first read this chapter. Anyway, I'll review chapt 40 next. (when I get thre)