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| Foxyjosh 2008-07-21 ch 40, | abuseThis is truly an amazing story. I can't believe I've never dropped a review for it the first time I read it. |
| Foxyjosh 2008-07-20 ch 8, | abuseThe Eevee 8. Let's see: Eevee, Jolteon, Vaporeon, Flareon, Espeon, Umbreon, Leafeon, and Glaceon. Yep that's 8. Wow! you must be part Espeon to think up something like that before Glaceon and Leafeon where discovered. LOL. This is still a terrific story. |
| TheGreenKnight63 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseHello!! My Name is Bien Canonizado,I'm a visually-disabled (blind) graduate student from the Philippines. Just dropped by to express my admiration for your writing-style... You are possibly one of the most skilled web-based authors that I have encountered in my time as a fanatic of fantasy/science fiction. You should really try to finish your stories,specially this particular one that I am reviewing right now. I am re-posting this review cause my old post was erased when some one hacked my old account. You know,your writing means very much to me,recently I just lost my sense of sight;and quite honestly it has been so hard adjusting to a life without being able to pick-up another printed book. Currently,I depend on my computer to read stories to me on-line,this is with the help of a screen-reading program. And let me tell you,ever since I discovered fan-fiction I couldn't stop reading your great stories! Please understand,your stories give me the strength to continue... (I'll not dwell on that fact too much.) I believe your talents are a God-given gift so that you may bring happiness to those who value this particular genre. So, Please, Please, Please, Please... Do not give up on this story... Update faster! My only wish is if you could make your chapters longer,I think the reader would have an easier time if the story were written in a few long chapters,rather than several short parts. At least each chapter should be 3,0 words long for better continuity. Easier for us to follow if we did not have to back-track so often because of short chapters. I hope that you will one day decide to once-again write. Please don't give up... I hope that you will reply,because it was very hard for me to write this review since I am hoping that you will notice this short letter out of all the others that you get. Please do not think that I am just spammer,cause I am serious when I make this request. If you wish to reply,please kindly send your comments to my e-mail It is written below with spaces and with the symbols spelled-out to avoid spammers. .ph.> (Bienvenido S. Canonizado) Phone number:+63917-433-8194 Electronic mail:f e n r i s (at) p a c i f i c (dot) n e t(dot) p h "There are more things in heaven and earth Horatio,then are dreamt of in your Philosophy..." |
| icyblueicy 2008-02-23 ch 40, | abuseThis is the best fic I've ever read. I wish there's a sequel. |
| Spazzcat-The-Neji-Glomper 2006-02-26 ch 40, | abusewow... that has to be one of the most incredible stories I've ever read! |
| AeonFrodo 2005-11-18 ch 40, | abuseWhat an awesome fic. Very well written. Well done dude. |
| anonomous 2004-11-20 ch 19, anon. | abuseWOW (faints froms all the excitment) |
| cloudfightback 2004-09-17 ch 40, anon. | abusebrillanit |
| BoneSatellite 2004-07-27 ch 40, anon. | abuseThis was the best pokemon story and one of the best fanfics I've ever read. [I hesitated to review for the sake of writing something more worthwhile, but oh well.] The only things that I didn't quite like about it were Jason's cliche-ish additude toward pokemon training and the fact that I was expecting an uplifting epilogue. But it was still incredible. |
| cloudfightback 2004-06-24 ch 40, anon. | abuseit the best pokemon story ever |
| QOShea 2004-06-21 ch 39, | abuseI was reading Against All Odds, a great story btw, but when I got to Ch 40, the story cut off for some reason. Is there another place you've archived this story? |
| BoneSatellite 2004-06-06 ch 27, anon. | abuseWhat the hell, though. The story's more interesting than ever before, with the suspenseful and romantic situations that the characters are involved in. Can hardly wait to see how it turns out! |
| BoneSatellite 2004-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent beginning. It must've been one or two years since I first read this chapter. Anyway, I'll review chapt 40 next. (when I get thre) |
| F 0 1075; 1593; / 1593; 107... 2003-10-20 ch 40, | abuseThis is by far the best fanfic. I've ever read. I even registered to just review it and tell the author that he *must* write more often. He should get into the fiction-writing buisness, because this one could've been best-seller. Too bad that there's copyright concerning pokemon and stuff. SEQUEL PLEASE! There's another fan-fic that could rival yours and I like it a lot but just the sheer size of yours and the amount of effort you put into it pulls it into first. The other one is still under construction (I'm not advertising so I won't type the title or author) and it's already been a year and only one update. Good luck in your future stories and may them be as great as this one! (though i think that might be fairly hard to do :) If you know what i mean...) |
| Raichu 2003-09-08 ch 40, | abuseThis is easily the best story I've read on ffnet, and tops most fanfics I've read anywhere. It's great how all the various themes intertwine. It has it's flaws too (Gyarados is water/flying, not dragon, and so is devastated by electric attacks; how could Daniel have such a strong team; one person having three legendaries--Mewtwo and two birds--is farfetched), but I really enjoyed it. I'm glad Jason overcame his temptation to become like his future self, even though two of his Pokemon did not. |