 Rosemarie-ouhisama 5/23/05 . chapter 6I love Satine's musings on wishing to be free of the attentions of other men now that she's a married woman. And kudos for her suspicions about Paul; you never dumb her down. I adore your depiction of Satine as a matter of fact.
Update, someday? |
 Rosemarie-ouhisama 5/23/05 . chapter 4Of all the stories that give Christian a sister, your Margaret may be one of the few (if not the only one) who doesn't: 1)Come off as a "mary sue" character (not that there's anything wrong with insertion if it's well done, but your margaret is a character in her own right, not just a fantasy wish-fulfillment of you, dear author), and 2)she is also perhaps the only "Christian's sister" I can think of who isn't simply a girl of 20 transported back to 1900, but actually thinks and behaves in a manner that seems quite plausible and realistic for an upper-middle class girl of that time. |
 Rosemarie-ouhisama 5/23/05 . chapter 5A pity you've never finished this! You're one of the best writers in this catagory, and your multi-chapter stories have the distinction of being amoung the rarities in this catagory that are true to the film while building and fleshing out the characters in believable ways. |
 NatashaRostof 5/1/03 . chapter 6Oh, no, you don’t mean to say this is the end? Are you going to write more sometime? I know this review is very belated, but….
I started with “The Price of Love” and read all the way through, tonight. Okay, you…have had me crying my eyes out, laughing hysterically, sighing happily…*giggles* your pen name was well chosen.
I think your work is absolutely amazing. I love the characters you’ve created, and the ones you’ve developed out of Satine and Christian. And it’s beautifully, brilliantly written; I love the description, and dialogue…I am totally in awe.
Awesome, awesome. And if you get around to it, do write more! :o) |
 AllyrienDM 11/25/02 . chapter 6*grins* Cute! But... this Paul guy... he seems to have plans... *shudders* |
 Nora9112 7/30/02 . chapter 6You are a good writer and should keep up the good work. i love your story. i was wonderful and i enjoyed reading it. keep with it and write another chapter soon. |
 Moony Lover 7/20/02 . chapter 5ohhhh,s he pregnant again! but how far along is she?
how cruel that paul, if i found out, if i were sating, i would... grrrrr, but i guess the interesting thing is going to happen, and around that paul _ |
 Moony Lover 7/20/02 . chapter 4how cute, i lov eit how you mix songs with the story |
 Moony Lover 7/20/02 . chapter 3i want her to be pregnant again :) they are so cute togheter, but i like him themost _ |
 Moony Lover 7/20/02 . chapter 2there's something spooky about margartet.. _
but christian he's so cuteeeeee with celeste! i love him! but i think satine is a little to shallow, i mean she was superficial UNTIL she met christian, but then love changed everything, anyway, great fic |
 Moony Lover 7/19/02 . chapter 1ohhhh, you are writing the sequel! how cute! but what did they mean by "tonight?" oh, and bythe way, i can't seem to end a proper review, but the last review of your chapter, i wanted to tell you hat congratulations for sucha good work.
i'm off now to keep on reading |
 Just Chasing Dreams 5/28/02 . chapter 6I love this story and I can't wait for more! As soon as I finished The Price of Love I started reading this one. But I just thougt of something. What about Satine's dream to become an actress? Are you going to make her become a star like she always wanted?
Just Chasing Dreams |
 ceridwen-amyed 5/22/02 . chapter 6Aww... I cannot tell you how *much* this story cheers me up - I love all fluff and dialogue and just... gah, I'm lost for words! :D And of course, the Muppet Xmas Carol songs rock... Well, they do! :P
Keep writing... Goodness knows, I need some happiness in my reading :) |
 karadarlin 5/20/02 . chapter 6 What do you mean, NOBODY LIKES THIS! I like it!
And that means the WORLD. |
 madelinear 5/17/02 . chapter 6“To think that the name of our child is dependent solely on your reading material.”
Not up to the ideal of singing a duet on top of an elephant, but one couldn’t have everything
of course, camie, you had to have oscar-worthy dialogue as well as an entertaining storyline AND fantastic visualization. Dammit it, Satine might not be able to have everything, but you do! |