 TealEyedBeing 9/22/11 . chapter 1oh SQUEE! |
 crackers411 5/15/11 . chapter 1D'awww! cute! |
 LaviLovinYuu 10/12/10 . chapter 1 You write really gorgeous stories. I think you should get tons more reviews!
Keep on writing awesome LaviYu! |
 namine zemyx 9/3/10 . chapter 1So kawaii love it! |
 seemslikeaporno 8/22/10 . chapter 1lolol, how cute. i haven't read a fic for this pairing in a while, but i'm glad i read this one. it was extremely cute and very in-character and gahh how you portrayed their relationship is so wonderful because it's exactly how i picture it - yuu always insulting lavi and trying to hurt him, but has those concerned undertones.
and lavi is just lavi, and acts like a kid all the time, and is sometimes serious enough to let kanda know that he understands him. just, lovely characterizations here. nice job. :D |
 Velox 8/9/10 . chapter 1I might have become diabetic from the sheer sweetness of this fic. That being said, you juxtapose the light hearted and rough elements of Lavi and Kanda's relationship very well. How they can go from snuggling to insults in 0.5 seconds but that just shows how they truly know and care for one another.
Great read! Also it should be 'Tough luck' instead of 'Touch luck' :D |
 Angel Fantasy 8/8/10 . chapter 1Cute! loved it! |
 Morphine Dementia 8/8/10 . chapter 1OMG. NICE. (And stop being so self-conscious. This is great. 3)
AUGH, LAVI YOU DIRTY BASTARD YOU. I'm not that fond of mud, either, really. XD Brilliant interactions and all. Especially how Lavi's grinning implies his evil intentions and how Kanda badmouthes him during the whole thing. Lovely.
And nice, relaxing bathsex is the perfect conclusion, lol. (Aw, the only fill where Kanda bottoms and it's skipped! /shot) Even though I wouldn't have minded reading it at detail, the implications fit in very well and I dare say it's enough in this case. Lovely, lovely
Great work. 3 ...nothing new there, is that. XD |
 Yusuke kun 8/8/10 . chapter 1Damn! its so good! but i wish that you put the lemony goodness in it. but still! its really good! i want a sequel! Please! XD |
 seiyuurabu 8/7/10 . chapter 1Bath scene part two thumbs up! |