aww! i love this story, please continue and update soon!

that was amazing ! i love chloe & oliver. best characters on smallville- ever ! can't wait for chapter 3 !

Really loved this chapter. Liked how you did a flashback, will we be seeing more of those?

ooooo wonder whats going to happen next, what shape Ollie is in and how Chloe is going to take it.

Can't wait to read more, great job :)

I cant believe they found Ollie! I hope he's doing good.

Loved the start of this fic, can't wait to read more. Love Chlollie, hopefully he will be found soon.

All i would say is instead of using a dash, use speech marks for speech.

Anyway great job :)

I highly agree with the other reviewer, and might I add that you pre-read the chps before posting them, there's some parts that are mispelled.

Other than that, great start to a fanfic. And im also a huge fan of Chlollie as well!

great start to the story. although is wasnt clear at all that chloe was in labor.

it would be better to use speech marks instead of dashes.

update soon please