|Reviews for Mistakes|
| crazy.weird.beautiful 2/1/11 . chapter 1
Why don't you continue this one? You have a really interesting storyline. :)
| Heart Inside of Me 8/10/10 . chapter 1
I liked this story. The first thing I did was check to see if it was marked as complete because the story, while open ended, seemed to close off so nicely. I think it's interesting where you chose to stop the story - you give us no indication, other than shock, as to what Hermione might choose. Plus, despite knowing what he's questioning, we don't truly know how he feels about the declaration - one could argue for happy, but one could also argue for guilt. I love ambiguous endings and you've given us a great one. Thank-you for sharing this with us.
| fifespice 8/8/10 . chapter 1
thatw as good but you cant leave it there whats hermiones reply to that hmm
| Winchester-or-Whitlock 8/8/10 . chapter 1
Whats her reply? i would love 2 know!
Interesting, well written and makes you want 2 read more!
| MagicMikey64 8/7/10 . chapter 1
Nice work on this story! :)
I now really want to know her reply.
I would personally read and review a sequel or a 2nd chapter.
But it's still a great story the way it is, great work. :)