Why don't you continue this one? You have a really interesting storyline. :)

I liked this story. The first thing I did was check to see if it was marked as complete because the story, while open ended, seemed to close off so nicely. I think it's interesting where you chose to stop the story - you give us no indication, other than shock, as to what Hermione might choose. Plus, despite knowing what he's questioning, we don't truly know how he feels about the declaration - one could argue for happy, but one could also argue for guilt. I love ambiguous endings and you've given us a great one. Thank-you for sharing this with us.

thatw as good but you cant leave it there whats hermiones reply to that hmm

YAY!

Whats her reply? i would love 2 know!

Interesting, well written and makes you want 2 read more!

Nice work on this story! :)

I now really want to know her reply.

I would personally read and review a sequel or a 2nd chapter.

But it's still a great story the way it is, great work. :)

10/10.

Mike.