plz write more!

this story so far is good... and i guess what's about to happen is better... but sadly, it seems this is one of them stories that will never be finished... -_-

were u ever goping to finish this... cause in my opinion this is the best EddxMarie fanfic out there, and you got all the charaters personlities perfect! I love the kankers sisters, and want to know if yer just abodaning this story completly, please pm me ur awnser... ;(

so far pretty good, this first chapter has caught my attention. what I liked was i can see both sides on this one, I see why Double D and Marie are angry and hurt by the other. I hope you update soon!

Good job at this one shot or chapter. It was written well and you followed the charcters well while making the flow of the story go just right. Hope to read from you again

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Hell, that was good) Especially ending. You continue? Because it's really interesting.

This story has caught my interest especially since I love this pairing so much! I like where your going with it sort far but I can't tell much till you update, hopefully that will be soon! So far the characters seem in order, but then it's fanfiction so you do have to bend things a little to fit with the story anyways so...update soon please! I'm out...

LostsoulofRegret _

Great story please continue.

this story is ineresting

id like to kiss marie

i like this story

asdfasdf, awesome! freaking awesome!

WOW! this is seriously powerful. i have no idea how i've missed it up to this point! please update soon, because i want to see how their relationship progresses. i love marie now *sigh*

great job!

No idea if this is a one shot or not, but either way I really enjoyed reading it. The flaw with a lot of Marie X Edd stories is that they usually have Double D secretly in love with Marie, which often feels too forced. This story (or just chapter?), however, had none of that. It flows nicely and translates well as more mature adaptation of the characters. When I was reading it I didn't have to try and say, "Yes, that feels like so-and-so," because it naturally was the character, be it a little older.

All-in-all, keep writing, I look forward to more from you.

i like this story