Demon: nice, nice lemony
White: sister? what's lemon?
Demon: something i'll never let you read.
White: D;

Omg! I love this story! I hope you continue this soon.) your a great writer and its hard to find those! Hope for more real soon.

p;ease update it soon.. i am eager to know more.. hope nothing bad happen to both tyki n lavi..

I love this story and hope you don't give up on it. w

i'm enjoying this story lol i'm not much for Mpreg really but this one is very interesting so i hope you continue so i can read more.

O.O 3 Steamy scene ;33 3 I wonder where this is going from here o.o 3 I look forward to more! Love it!

love that Tyki is going on a mission

What their not going to put their clothes on? lol Is this beta-ed/Is your mother tongue English?

new chapter PLEASE asap!

3 I quite like this fic 3 Tykki and Lavi are strangely good together 3 I always look forward to the chapter updates 3 3 Keep up the awesomeness ;3 33

I'm actually really surprised that I read your story, seeing as I am a diehard Laven fangirl. I rarely read DGM fics containing Allen or Lavi paired with other people because I feel that in most of said stories everyone is painfully OOC. But you managed to pull it off by creating an interesting and original idea. I'm not saying that this fic will make me become a Lucky fangirl, but this fic has a plotline that I have become interested in and I enjoy reading it.

Awwww Tyki's so sweet!

Oh thank god you didn't kill the child! I've been so anxious under the waiting for this chapter it felt like I walked on needles! Great job there! And I'll pster you until next chapter come! (actually until this fic is finished :D)

awesome chapter and lime

Chu! Thank You for updating :3

That was so cute, and poor Tyki and Lavi. They got 'interrupted' XD

Hope you update soon (No ones updates their Lucky stories anymore -_- )