So I had a bit of a moment and thought 'underfed' was 'un-derfed' , whatever a derf is. Don't ask. Anyways EdWin is adorable and so is this story .

Lovely!

Very nice, it was really good!

if this is not elricest than do not put it under elricest, plz

Uwaa... so sweet... I like bittersweet-ness too.

Thanks for your review on Father, Husband, Friend!

Lovely. Really well done. Never forgetting Ed's misery from the heat even in the midst of all his reflection. This story was recommended to me. It's just lovely how you pulled their future together so believable. Would love to see more of it though.

This is really lovely! I love how in-character you made the Trio, and how much you said in such a short story.

It has been a while since I first read this and I don't usually review things but there is one thing I must say.

I had always been a bit depressed with how the manga ended, especially because Ed couldn't use alchemy anymore. The way you wrote this truly showed how he was happy (that scene on the roof didn't cut it). This brought me to peace with it. THANK YOU.

...um, sorry I'm not commenting on the story itself. I did enjoy reading this... really!