oh and one more thing you should proof read this, it's painful for me to read though there are a lot of tense errors and spelling errors.

This story is really nice. I like the idea and the concept that you have. I want to point out something to you, though. Soraoi makes no sense if you were trying to make the name mean blue sky that would be Sora Aoi which would make no sense because Aoi would have to be her last name. In future reference you should do some research before naming a character. I hope to see more updates. Thank you.

Where the date?*teary eyes*

hic,i am so looking forward on it

*pout*

ah. . . Nice chap for end. . .

Will miss u on khr fandom angel

You know, I was just thinking (which is always a bad thing :D) that when Hibari says "I'll bite you to death" it would actually make sense here. :D Just a friendly observation.

Yay! XD She's not dead! _

Ooo! I am glad havent kill angel yet!XD

yay! What amazing chap!

Huwa Sweet hibari,aoi u have to prepare hibari love attack, cuz angel will make both of u go to date

ah! Really *bow* thanks so much making this chap angel*hug*

please write more...SHE CAN'T DIE YET!TOT TTOTT T.T TTTT AOI-CHAN MUST LIIIIIIIVE! *starts crying dramaticly* IF SHE LEAVES KYON PYON THEN I CALL DOUBLE DIBS ON HIM T.T you should write more of this story. its really good. oh and I was wondering if you would try my khr fanfic and give me some advice on how I could make it better. seeing as you would be my sempai in this field I hope to learn from you if that's alright with you. *w* sankyuu for the story! arriverderci!

Please make it a happy ending...

Make it happy damnit! T_T I want her to realize that Hiari needs her alive! Update soon!

*crying* no! Aoi chan dead?no! *sob*, i dont want her dead, and hibari sad. . *thinking to choke author or kill maybe*

Really, i want some happy ending please? But dont make hiba with another person,cuz aoi just for hiba in this ficX9

Yay!another chap

happy to see this chap update,oh and yes,i just realize another fic with soraoi name author is same as u i didnt see it well :(

mistake,when ryohei and yamamote get shoo'ed from hibari castle, they bring along gokudera away, but u wrote it hibari not gokudera

Hewoos :) This story is nice, but how is it Tsuna x Hibari when it's Hibari x OC? :D Well, good job, and good luck!

Nice story desu!

Cant wait to read new chap

why many soraoi i read lately?like on star guardian,this