Hey, nice story! I read it over and over again two or three times, and I've come to an intelligent thought...

You have a talent! ;-) Nice story!

I liked it and am glad you finished it. I would however, have liked to learn more about Lillian and her daughter, what happened and things like that.

This story really works- I could totally see it happening. Your images of human fears and the measures that desperate people will take make your characters real. What if Kelly really did find her parents someday?

Love it! Please hurry with the rest.

Great story!(so far) I love KELLY! and personally I don't think that the show explored her backround enough, it was only scatched on the surface!

KEEP WRITING, NEED MORE!

Sounds good. I like it.

that was... intresting... pleaz cont.

I'm really enjoying this so far. I think it's the best you've ever written and I'm going to keep checking for updates. Good work!