Darian21,

Very touching story I enjoyed it deeply.

Jullian Gray

I love this story!

Ya know, I totally never thought of the ramifications of Starbuck and Zack's little trade-up. I mean that would have to be a powerful guilt trip to be on. Something that is very interesting and worth exploring, and I thank you for thinking of it.

I am all for short chapters, so I hate to say this, but I almost feel this is just a little short. Well, maybe I kind of wish there were a little more expository dialogue between Adama and Starbuck...ya know maybe a little conversational back story about how he is very close to the family and all that.

Still, you managed to capture some of the sadness of that first episode and I like that...hahaha. So Good Job!

Very nice job :)

Explores a more vulnerable side of Starbuck, and I like how Adama views him as a son... my first BSG fic read, and I love it! :D