This one was really great it was so sweet i love it

LOVE IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! _

Aww! So beautiful.

This story is really sweet, I'm not sure how I even found it, it's so far back in the pages. I'm glad I did though and it's going straight to my fav stories list! Thank you.

I still think this is one of the cutest, sweetest fics -. I'm glad at least a couple of my fave authors are still around. Welp, keep up that great writing!

Wow, that was just ... well beautiful. Nicely written. I really like how you bounced around. And the ending. I could totally picture it! Keep it up! :)

That was sad yet joyful. Good work! A lot of people don't understand how important the father and daughter relationship is. I'm thankful I have a good relationship with my own dad. Excellent fic!

Oh, that was awesome!

Aww Kami I loved this fic! Truly, madly, deeply! It was so sweet and sad at the sam time. Definitely became one of my favourites in an instant!_ And was reliefed about the ending too - got a little worried there for a second with the Kei -guy, lol. Well, like we all know Vegeta could never accept any other mate for his Princess than a saiyan, right. Goten and Bra so belong together anyway if you ask me_

Wonderful fic - no doubt about it!

_ Me thinks you did a nice job on the first person here. Like everyone says - over and over and over and over and ov- okay, stopping now _ just think 'energizer bunny' - it's hard to write in FP but you did an EXCELLENT job _; I had a few fave lines.

"Even Dodoria covered in hives was more appealing than my daughter was when she was born."

I thought that was funny, made me giggle silly like _;;

"...she would be finding out what Lord Enma looked like."

And I thought that was great too. _;

Sadly the line I liked the most wasnt even in the story! It was in your AN, the comment about dead walrus chunks had me on the floor O_o;; but hell thats cool _;;;;;;;

Anyway, on to new stories! _

That was sooo...I cant find the words to discribe it.

It brought tears to my eyes, Thats really sweet.

I know thats how my Daddy will feel when i Get

Married.

Good job!

Bye

This is wonderful. I understand it very well. Stream of conciousness is something I'm very familiar with. This way it works.

Of course, its always the *good* authors that never get enough reviews, as I'm sure you've noticed. But its quality, my friend, quality that always matters. I like the story; its nearly seemless in its transitions, keeps relatively in character, and allows a wonderful glimpse into that closed off mind of our dear Saiyan Prince. .;; Keep it up!

*sniff*... excuse me... I think I need a... *sniffle*... tissue... *choke*... that was beautiful... *sniff*... I need to be excused! (runs to a corner to cry about the incredibly touching story)... Keep up the good work :)

that was good I almost cried.