Very good introduction of establishing Hatsumomo's relations with other people. It's nice to read she's survived and had a familiy. Very promising read overall. I'd loooove to continue reading your work. Please continue. Thank you.

please, don't stop, i find it very interesting, and this story is so captivating, because it's real!

Wow! That's really cool. I love the book Memoirs of a Geisha! Lol:-)

I understand completely!

That's actually a good idea It may take a while to continue the story, but when you start it again, it'll be more realistic and believable!

Good luck!

love the story..

Please continue! This story is very good. Hatsumomo is always seen as the villain, and I can really imagine little Hoshi. I'm excited to see how this will turn out. Your writing is superb, and is totally comparable to the actual Memoirs. Great job!

please continue to update this fascinating story!

What I've read so far is really good and interesting. Keep it up :)

This is really good so far! You should definitely update soon. It's a really interesting take on Hatsumomo. I've always been pretty sympathetic of her, and you seem to have captured her blunt way of telling things perfectly. I can't wait to see where you take it.

I loved it! It was such a unique look on Hatsumomo and her legacy! I can't wait to read more ! :)

This story is great and well written please continue to write