Just found your story and i love it hope you update soon :)

UPDATE PLEASE. D:

PLEASE update! I love this story a lot! And if you do, maybe throw in a small lemon? 0.0

I love you! No seriously, i love you. Uve made the best HaseoXAtoli / RyouXChigusa fanfic ever. If I find u in real life I would do some pretty weird things, even for me... and that is saying something.

Anyways awesome story so far, i hope it continues. Oh and one more thing. UPDATE NOW! -coughs- Okay thats all :D

Wow, i love this pairing

ur story is so cute, but too short

keep continue, and please make it longer

This is really an awesome HaseoxAtoli fanfic yet! 33

I really cant wait for the next chap, and I just cant WAIT for the two of them to get all fluffy!

Sony: Haseo YOU JERK, AND FOR CRYING OUT LOUD BANG ATOLI ALREADY

Haseo: WHAT!

Sony: did I say that out loud?

Haseo: YOU SICK BIG NOSED PERVERT

Sony: *eye twitches* say that last part again I dare you

Haseo: BIG...NOSE

Sony: okay *takes out buster sword* BRING IT

Haseo: *takes out scythe* YOU ASKED FOR IT

Atoli: *blush on her face* Sony says he really liked the chapter and hopes you update soon

Sony: CRETIN

Haseo: LOSER

Sony: DUMBASS

Atoli: umm... please hurry

is the next chapter gonna be about how atoli is gonna cry and question Ryou about the drawing or something nd ryou will like be embarresed...

haha hey one idea like there be like a misunderstanding between haseo and alkiad and atoli is like mad at him or somehting like that... i bet its funny cuz i thought of in my head when they were talking about the secret training nd all that in the game

y did he like atoli?

is there like a manga for this series?

he has a blind spot?

Nice Onii - San! 3

I hate her mom though... :(

I really don't know what's going on here, but it's really good!

*slaps you for a 'that's what she said joke'*

:D Love joo!

cute chapter, er sorta, wow even I wanted to punch her mom straight in the face, still it all turned out well so great work and can't wait for the next chapter so till then see

0_0, YOU ARE A GENIUS, that's all I really have to say so great chapter and can't wait for the next so till then see

well this is certainly interesting, I won't call this the crappiest thing ever, not until I see what you've got next, until then this is a fairly interesting story and I'll look forward to what happens next so till then see