   Eclipse8502 11/22/11 . chapter 1Weird. A monster with a hero complex. Like Frankenstein? |
| Liedral 10/20/11 . chapter 1 The Omake
'Chomp' Owch! but what won that was the 'hurry up and grow a new one' |
| Lord Sia 8/18/11 . chapter 1 ... Ouch.
He probably deserved it, though. |
| ahgndouity 10/30/10 . chapter 1 great story and very well written
wish u could turn this into a story as it would be a fantastic story
and the omake was hilarious |
| RIOSHO 9/30/10 . chapter 1 AWESOME! I REALLY LOVED THE BED TRICK! _ |
| Sephiroth owns u all 9/6/10 . chapter 1 Awesome Story |
| King of the DamnD 8/22/10 . chapter 1 turn this into a story! D |
| ArrancarMaiden 8/18/10 . chapter 1 That was...uh...interesting. Kinda cool though. |
| colin 8/16/10 . chapter 1 Damn this would be a hell of a story if you actually made it into one. |
| Still Not Dead Yet 8/12/10 . chapter 1 It certainly is an interesting team.
Couldn't Naruto have just used his super henge? |
| Kojiro Kun 8/11/10 . chapter 1 Ha Ha! awesome, you really manged to pull it of well, thier characters are exactly how i envisoned it, ruthless and not caring what others think,if you have time i would love to see it as a full fic, though hopefully if not, somebody would be influenced by it to do one!
P.S: And OUCH, for the omake... |
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