N-I-C-E! Only ONE installment? I could read this all day!

This was wonderful! I hope you'll write more someday :)

After watching Thorn Birds for the last few days I have come across this story on here. Its amazing, true to the characters and a great one off.

Loved the Thornbirds...have to say I didn't really care for this story sorry.

I liked it so cute!

This was pretty good. Liked the part about her wanting the parts God wasn't going to use anyway.

I'm not familiar with the characters, so I can't tell if you got their tone right. You have a couple of run-on sentences and one or two verb tense issues, but otherwise, nice job.

It's a good story, but Thorn Birds has not been too visible of late which is probably why no one has responded.

So, I know nothing about this show except what is in this story, but I enjoyed it as well as I can not knowing much of the background. You wrote it well and it was interesting.

ok for real. its brilliant like always, i just didnt want you getting a bigger head than you already got.. your a pretty good writer actually you should think abut getting a book published or something. lol. top effort. :D

yeiks! this is horrible...it sucks d-d-deliete it. no ralph, dont go!. lol just kidding. :D