Oh, this was so sweet! The real episode could have used something like this :) I can't believe there's almost no fanfictions for this series.

I loved it, it is perfect for Tom, it feels as if it is what he would actually think and do. I agree with you about how he told Ellen being a disappointment, your version is a much better replacement. Well done.

This was brilliant! Very moving, and provided a much deeper insight into Tom's feelings for Agnes. Thanks for sharing.

Beautifully done. Love Tom Builder. :-)

aw, that was heartbreaking. And it certainly showed us, how it should have been on screen :)

Please, please never stop writing POTE-fanfic :))

AH! I like this version of this scene much better!

I'm also in agreement with Archimedes. There should be more fanfiction for this brilliant series!

Wonderful job!

Brilliant story, thanks for uploading :) Wish there was more for this brilliant novel/TV series.

Thank you! Now this is how that scene should have played out.