|Reviews for Unseen|
| mewtwosangel 1/27/13 . chapter 18
Please update I rather like this story.
| rose1589 8/22/12 . chapter 18
omgggg loved it sooo much write more very soon pretty please?
| MoonyPadfootProngs14 6/23/12 . chapter 18
Pleas pretty please update. This is the best Sirius/OC I have read in months, and I really want to know what happens
| miZaru667 3/29/12 . chapter 18
ooohhhh me likes. :) This story looks like it's heading down an interesting path. I'm pretty excited to see what you come up with next xD
I just have one suggestion about formatting. I think it would be better to separate your paragraphs a bit. They're bit hard to read sometimes because they're so long. A good way to do this is double enter every time you get a new bit of dialogue. The story's so great, you wouldn't want people put off by super long paragraphs.
Loving it! Can't wait for your next update :DDDD and looool I LOVE Dumbledore. I actually laugh out loud when he was doing yoga. Like seriously died for a couple minutes back there. Hil-ARIOUS.
| Nothingsperfect 12/23/11 . chapter 18
i love this story!
Please update soon ? :)
| still burning bridges 10/9/11 . chapter 18
Holy shit, this is a good plot.
| Lira-leigh54 8/18/11 . chapter 18
Spin the bottle...are they going to finally kiss?
This is a great story, very well written...can't believe I haven't read it before. I totally want to call someone a batch of cookies:)
Can't wait for more
| angel2u 6/16/11 . chapter 18
| crazy-wee-cat 1/24/11 . chapter 18
I reeeeally like this story, and I hope you update soon!
| Battle-Of-Evermore-1 1/21/11 . chapter 18
Reviewing with the hope that you'll continue this story! I love the plotline and prophecy, they're both quite unique. I loved it when Sirius was blind, the parts with James knocking him into walls had me laughing out loud (lol kinda sadistic). Oh and dumbledore in pink doing yoga - that was so wellwritten that I could totally picture it in my head (which was kinda horrific and lol-worthy at the same time!) Annnyway your OC Taylor is a great character and you are such a superb writer, it's so easy to get all wrapped up and emotionally invested in your story and characters, so you have to update soon pleeease!
| PurpleBoom 12/1/10 . chapter 18
this is awesome!
i love it!
please please please update soon?
| DuckysDanni 11/29/10 . chapter 18
I Have A Few Issues With You And Your Writting:
1. It's Too Good
2. I Want More
3. Your To Evil Not To Have Updated Yet
4. Taylor And Sirius Want To Be Updated- They Don't Give A Crap That You Only Updated Two Days Ago They Really Wanna Know What They Do Next.
And Before You Ask They Told Me That :P
UPDATEE! Or Elsee... Be Warned I Know Voldemort ;)
| DuckysDanni 11/28/10 . chapter 2
I Never Really Thought Of Peter As Hot, I Think J.K Describes Him As A Boy With A Face Of A Rat And Dirty Blonde Hair, It's Nice To See How That's Been Interpretated, It's Certainly Different :/
| DuckysDanni 11/28/10 . chapter 1
I Get Nagged For This Alot So I Know How Anoyying It Is When You Get Reviews Like This But PLEASE Try Space Your Work Out! I Love This Though And I Love The Little Cliffy. I Am So Glad You Haven't Made Her A Perfect Girl Who Is Good At EVERYTHING And Is Popular Aswell! Yeah Good So Far! :)
| ForeverTeamEdward13 11/28/10 . chapter 18
good chapter! please update again soon!