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| Reviews for Gypsy Rose |
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   ukitakeitalialover041757 12/31/12 . chapter 5Good story I can't wait for the next update. |
| Ms. Scarlet Taylor 3/26/12 . chapter 4 Please continue this! |
| dragonrain618 7/10/11 . chapter 4 i really hope that your going to continue this because i loved that cliffhanger! I wonder what Wally will do when he realizes his assistant is Jewel and Gypsy Rose is his daughter :D |
| Champion of Justice 1/14/11 . chapter 4 Awesome story. I can't wait to read more. please update soon. |
| wendaleman 12/30/10 . chapter 4 OMG! You have to continue this story I have to know what happens next! It's a really good story. |
| Kyer 8/12/10 . chapter 1 Can tell this is not going to be my cup of Earl Grey, but here's some corrections for you: Second sentence is a bit wordy. Besides, the same info is given later in the story when he and the woman size each other up. These words almost made Wally... (also lose the second comma.) Lightning Team? Okay, that read as kind of cheesy. Just saying. The contrast between the two men... Now, how on Earth... save Flash City? Um...Flash City? In the animated 'verse he works in Central City, but even there his super hero work encompasses more than just Central City. Maybe change it to save the world? Good luck. Afraid I'm just not into oc/romances, but go for it. |
