This is so sappy. I love it!

Oh my goodness that was so cute! Good job :)

I don't this at all sappy at all, in fact, I wished that you had really developed it into a short story. It was sweet, flowed well and had great potential. As it was, it felt incomplete and left me disappointed because I wanted more.

i love how you manage to tell such stories in so little words. you definitely have a gift. i love all your short stories...i'm just too lazy to review LOL but please, continue to keep writing them :)

omg. i like thisalot! hehe:) but wats up wit the bump on her stomach did she get a bug bite?...wait...OHHHHHHHHHHHH! i get it! shes preggo! hahahahhhahaha! okay. srry 4 the slow moment.:D clever...very very clever:)

Awwww! That was so sweeeeet! Short and sweet. I'm like smiling! See! :-D LOL!

Nice! Very short & sweet!

I liked this, it's a very sweet story. Sappy works for me!