Good chapters! UPDATE SOON!

This is a very good story so far! Keep up the good work. I still have to wait to put up my stories but they will be up soon. Come and check them out the day after tomorrow; that's when I'll have them up.

This is really good. I am impressed and incredibly jealous. I've never seen nor thought of this pairing before, and when I saw the summary I was a little unsure about whether I should click on the title and venture inside. Well, I did, and I am ever so glad! Can't wait for the rest of Chapter Two!

Some spelling errors, minor grammatical things, but otherwise this first chapter was cool. Neat ideas, even if they've been done before (but who says a new take on things isn't a good thing?). Interesting OC's, nice interpretation of Bombalurina's character, etc. Good job!

Wow. Very intresting and very well written. Poetic, I might say :) Please continue, I'd love to see what happens next! :)