|Reviews for You Belong to Me CUT VERSION|
| animechick57 2/2/13 . chapter 11
henry is just too cute XD
some reason i laugh when Walter told
Henry he sleeps a lot XD
I LUV UR FANFIC XD
| StuckInRoom302 6/13/12 . chapter 11
Im sorry that someone keeps bashing the story. i really liked it.
| HellzLittleAngel 6/20/11 . chapter 11
; U ; D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.
This story really makes me so happy! I am loving the way you characterized Henry and Walter in this. It's not the usual, "BAHBAHABAHIMGONNARAPEYOU" and "OHNOESSSS". :3
The ending made me die from happiness. :heart: My mother was giving me a weird look because I kept going, "B'awwww!" over and over. XD
I hope to read more Henry/Walter fics from you!
| Roboninks 6/14/11 . chapter 11
Well. I am very glad it was a happy ending! And fix those spelling mistakes luv!
| xdiexyoungx 8/30/10 . chapter 1
can u set up a link to the story? my computer doesn't work well on Y!gallery. Love the story btw
| blackbleedingroses539 8/29/10 . chapter 11
there, i signed in to review this time XD
i really liked your story. the ending was a little rushed, and perhaps a tad confusing, but it was sweet so i forgive you ;P
there are never enough happy endings for walter and henry P
i hope you write more stories for the pairing! _
| blackbleedingroses539 8/28/10 . chapter 10
yay, updates _
i can't wait to see what happens next :D
| blackbleedingroses539 8/16/10 . chapter 1
hi, just here to tell you that you have to keep updating! i really enjoy this story, and would hate to see it left behind and forgotten by it's author(aka: you), all alone to collect dust along with too many other good walterxhenry fanfics. your idea is really different from any i've seen before, which is to your advantage as the author, because i tend to enjoy that which is different or that which i haven't seen before in a fanfic.
now i know that you have been updating so far at an alarming rate(not a bad thing, i assure you), or at least at a convenient rate. i am not here to complain but to advise you to only post about a chapter or two a week so that you don't fall behind, or get overwhelmed by your own story. it is often in these circumstances that authors find themselves losing interest in their work or too overwhelmed to continue, and end up abandoning their pieces. i'm not saying this will happen to you(and i apologize if it sounded rude), but i want you to be aware of it so that i don't lose a promising multi-chapter fic (of which there are far too few for this pairing).
to review the fanfic itself, i must say you are doing a wonderful job with it. there are a few gramatical errors, but no more than what is expected (and far fewer than what many other fanfic writers on here are guilty of), as it is nearly inevitable that even a good fanfic might make a mistake or two. as i said before, i enjoy tha your idea is different from anything i've read before, although at times it seems that henry is giving in a bit too quickly (but it isn't nearly as bad a some, who would have the top/seme/dominant/whatever(in this case walter) rape the bottom/uke/submissive/whatever(in this case henry, who then immediately becomes devotedly in love with attacker), but i can under stand it as a side affect of shock at the situation, as well as a resignation that there is no foreseeable escape for henry, who is just trying what he can to make himself comfortable in the situation, along with the very beginning traces of stockholm syndrome(sure to grow in the future, as the story progresses).
now, i don't know if this was in your plans or if you decided against any of them, but i had a few ideas(which i am perfectly fine with if they're ignored...so long as you ignore my lapse of grammatical ability just then XP). perhaps henry can meet eileen in the future and for ma small crush on her, much to the chagrin of a VERY posessive walter (henry can either be in love with walter at this point, or still resisting, it doesn't really matter. believe me, regardless of who you end up with in life, they will still likely develop a "crush" on that cute weather forecaster, or some star, or whatever XD). or maybe when things finally come to climax(no pun intended), walter is unsure of whether or not he wants to go through with killing henry, and either doesn't, or is given assurance that henry will be made immortal along with him so that they can be together (forever...*sighs romantically*XD). like i said earlier, you can listen to my suggestions or no. if you don't i can always write a fanfic of my own that uses them XD(it would be different from yours, i swear XD).
if you read my essay, thanks! if you didn't, i don't blame you XD! i'm just happy i was able to work up the nerve to get my opinion out to you XD!
roses, out ;P
| Bearforce1 8/16/10 . chapter 4
OMZG! I love IT!
| Bearforce1 8/13/10 . chapter 1