I am enjoying the plot twists! Loved the oath and god speech of Owen and Jack's reply.

Keep writing!

Just read this and I've got to say I'm lovin' it so far. Update soon!

Serial-Doodler

I've been busy this past week and I've just got round to reading this through, all in one go. I must say it's intriguing and I'm really enjoying it.

And Alice is sick too. :-(

Keep going.

good set of chapters, I can't wait to see where this goes...at first I was like Yvonne Hartman, WHAT? but now it seems so clever!

Oh, the plot thickens! At least the team is working together, with a direction. And trust Ianto to have the first inkling of a theory.

Keep writing!

It all hit the fan and chaos ensued. What's Jack going to do now?

Good story and plotline idea I haven't run across before. I'll be interested to follow how it all turns out.

Keep writing!

uh oh. I think Ianto is about to find out a lot more than he should...keep up the great work!

Gripping chapter! Loved the detail of Gwen and the cold feet, as well as Ianto's casual decision to investigate Jack's phone records. Character interactions are really good.

Keep writing!

Ah, the plot thickens!

Keep writing!

That was a good chapter, dropping us right into the lives of the team members. Well done.

Keep writing!

I am loving this story! You have captured the characters brilliantly. Theoir every word and move is right. I love it when an author has a true sense of our heroes! Looking forward to reading more :-)

Krekta

aw, this is very sad. I want to hug all of them! except maybe Gwen.

oooh. very intersting start, even though nothing really happened. haha. update soon XD

Well, good start, and a mystery to solve of who 'him' is.

Keep writing!