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Question: How can she or the gorillas possibly know how to read? Also, it looks like you called it quits on this piece. Pity, story wise it's not too bad(though could use some tweaking here and there in regards to "realism"[I am willing to suspend my disbelief, not hang it by the neck until dead.]). Well, maybe you'll update again after all. Laters.

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i loved it! it was funny! and cute! write more! and i love ur funny lil things u put in there!e it was such a good story! e...ill stop now mhhm e...

That was a cute story...You should update it. I'd like to see what happens between Serena and Darien later on in the story.

Please put up the next chapter its getting really interesting and do try to make it longer.

loved the story. not an original but a good twist on an old favorite. please dont stop writin so many good storys are lost that way. :)

OMG, how could u stop there, please hurry up with the next chapter thnxs!

awwwww...that's sweet...please write more soon, or i'll cry :(

-Lucky

great story and plot ,can't wait to read what happends would be better if it wasn't in one papagraph

Hey that's funny trying to imagine Darien climbing . I like your story. G2G

plz plz put out the next chapter

very good update soon. I'll be checking for updates. Eo

hey, it's about time that u uploaded a new chapter. :-) it was good too. keep writing, i can't wait to read more!

did he shoot Serena? please, no! you cant do that. whats gonna happen next? please make it not Serena. make it a snake.

good story, please write another chapter to it soon. love it!

SerenaChiba

NO!OMG! More please! DOn't let it be serena! Ahh! E-mail me when you update! I want more Jungle Fever!