Good story.

Happy ending.

Except for Jethro who is still in the big chair.

hehe

He deserves to be there for a while.

Vance and Jackie reunited.

That just made me happy.

Thanks for sharing such a good story with us.

Didn't expect it to end so soon; but then again, there's no point in dragging things out just for extra chapters.

Like how they captured Stolpe and very glad Leon will be okay.

Thanks for a terrific and spellbinding read!

Aww, good story. Little abrupt ending, but good.

Oh my...

My ulcers are burning fiercely now.

A kitty as a lure, that's just plain evil.

They got to find him soon!

Oh no lily stay inside! This not good!

Uh-oh! Lily shouldn't have went outside. Now I'm gonna be worried about her till the next update. Yikes!

It doesn't actually snow that much in that area. There's no such thing as "regular snowfall" and almost never in November.

I hope that information about Stolpe and Coltrane pans out. They need a break in this case.

Nicely done investigative work. Also nice job with the kidnapper with his head games and torture; and also with Vance and how he's dealing with it.

The call about Jared made me shiver.

Too easy to imagine.

Good chapter.

They make a little progress and then fall back.

Just like life.

Well done! Nice, taut story, and I like how you're writing each character.

Hoping you'll hurry with your updates... :}

Great start! Intriguing...

Great story so far. I love the idea of Gibbs being a possible suspect when you mentioned it in chapter 2...that could definitely throw a curve ball on things, and may be part of the plan of the kidnapper? Update soon! :)

Another super chapter. You're doing great with Gibbs, showing his mood and concerns. It would be typical for the rest of the team to feel paranoid that the're suspects and have a meeting in the elevator. (grin)

I found one tiny error. When Gibbs was looking at the pictures on Vance's desk, you called the daughter Kayla. Then at the end when Vance was thinking about her, you called her Lily. Speaking of Vance, that was an interesting song he chose to sing. Very unexpected. LOL.

Leon singing Santa Claus is coming to town in the dark...that made me very sad...I felt his pain.

Good job!

You have me totally intrigued!

Next chapter please!