Excellent job, i like it a lot.

rha ... I love your story ! I even translated it into French, can I publish the translation on ff.net, please, please, please !

that was.interesting.heh heh o.o;

great. And I so didn't expect the ending. Totally caught me off guard.

Love it, absolutly wonderful writing, although it turned in a direction that was unexpected.

that was.. strange, and definetly unique.. cool.

absolutly hilarious...bloody spiffen!

Heehee, that was cool! ^_^ And funny, too. =3