wow that was intense..:}

This was very well written; you're a great writer.

That was awesome. God, poor Alice! It makes me want to go and write a happy Bellice piece just to make it up to her! Very well written, loved it.

Well...WOW.

I love this so much.

I'm sad, because I always like Alice to be happy.

But I loved it.

There was things I related to and never had words to describe and well there's the description I needed.

The explenation I needed.

I loved this. I could say it a hundred times and not get tired of it lol.

Sad, but beautiful. Seriously, I getting a bit a misty here. I think I'm just gonna pretend that Bella will have a change of heart in a hundred years or so :)

Sad but very very good. I really like it :)

hehe, I have decided... that you are a very angsty teen.

*sigh* poor alice. This story makes me sad for her :( I think I'll do a bella/alice fic after I'm finished with Learning How to Love. I always loved this pairing :)

Very well written, sweetie. I am loving your stories so far!

wow angsty thats a realy good fic but poor alice thats heart breaking very well writen work tho :D

That was a gripping story. So sad! You're really doing a good job capturing the misery of Alice's future prospects and you put into perspective, how lucky we are to be human - in some situations it is by far better, at least we die some day. Anyhow, I loved your story, it was very well written!

Wow, this was pretty intense. But I love it. Very beautifully written, it's special.

So sad! Like, Break out the kleenex! The writing was really excellent, though.

A bit on the sad and angsty side for my taste but still a good read. Nice work.

...wow. that was amazing.