 JJ Rust 9/16/08 . chapter 9Cool ending. I also liked Vader just going medievil on the Borg and erasing their minds.
Excellent story. Good work. |
 JJ Rust 9/15/08 . chapter 8Good chapter. I liked how you took the reader through the process Daala going from human to Borg. Great inner thoughts from her. |
 JJ Rust 9/11/08 . chapter 7Oh snap! Total "First Contact" here. Things look to get really interesting now that the Borg have infiltrated the Death Star. I am so enjoying this story. |
 JJ Rust 9/9/08 . chapter 6Good chapter. I like the tactics of the Borg as they prepare to engage the Death Star. |
 JJ Rust 9/8/08 . chapter 5Way cool. I really liked the way you described being inside the Borg mind with Darth Vader and Tarkin. Good job on Tarkin's path to finally betraying the Empire. You have one really good story here. |
 JJ Rust 9/6/08 . chapter 4Good scene. I liked watching Darth Vader kick some Borg butt! Yeah, what can the Borg do against the Force. Interested to see if they have some way to adapt to it.
Good job!
Oh, just one typo I spotted. "cam" instead of "came."
Even so, from a spelling and grammatical standpoint, this is a very clean story. |
 JJ Rust 9/2/08 . chapter 3Good stuff. I liked how you portrayed your major. Definitely acted as someone promoted beyond his ability because of who is uncle is. A few sentences you used "Blast" and "Damage" a few too many times. It will be cool to see what happens when the Borg invade the Death Star. |
 JJ Rust 8/31/08 . chapter 2Very cool beginning and well-written. I don't notice any spelling or grammar errors. I really like the way you write for the Borg. The Death Star vs. a Borg Cube. This looks like it's going to be wicked awesome! |
 Tilius 8/29/06 . chapter 9Great story. |
 stevie 7/23/05 . chapter 9 this IS SO DAMN GOOD MORE IS NEEDED |
 Jaysus 7/18/05 . chapter 1 Dude, you gotta keep going. It rocks! |
 X-Over 10/17/04 . chapter 1Please update this wonderful crossover story of yours very soon, pretty please. Thank you. :) |
 Arachne 5/8/03 . chapter 9 Y'know, I think that's one of the best Wars/Trek crossovers I've ever read. Interesting Tarkin and Vader characterisation, and I like the way you write your Queen. |
 Luis 4/18/03 . chapter 9 PLease write the sequel to this wonderful crossover story of yours very soon. |
 TD Master 9/7/02 . chapter 9I loved this story. I've been waiting for ages for the next chapter. Please update it soon! |