It was over far to quick to get the nessesary emotional involvement

-sob- Wahhhhh! Does anyone have a tissue? Oh, thanks. -blows nose- That was...sad. Really really sad.

omfg that great

Sad... Finally read your other fics. Not bad for your "early days" Very sad. You should write more serious fics

That was great! *sniff* I thought I was gonna cry...*sniff* Keep up the good work...*sniff*

Wow... Touching... You should send that in to Square! o_o

Nice! I have a much different view of Rufus (as pure evil), but this was a good one. By the way, on a more personal note, I gave him the middle name of Julian because I kept hearing the initial J, like in your penname!

::yawns and rolls eyes:: booriinggg...oh and im really reviewing this cause i hate your tifa/cloud fics...just thought id say that :P

Wow, that one was really nice.

stupid

[;)

Wow, it's a very interesting short fic and it certainly gives a believable explanation for Rufus' behaviour later on in the game.