I'm impressed that you wrote so many! I really like them.

Forgive me if my names are off-I know the new translation.

I really liked how Mirdim and Gildas (or Mildain and Guildus, as they used to be) share one! I don't know why, it just seems like they are two halves of one whole.

Even if they aren't related like the sisters are, they can share one just the same!

I liked Vyce's (I never knew it was "Vice"...), as he's one of my favorite characters... "Yearning for Acceptance"... What a perfect name! Canopus was good, too!

Please continue! They were very nice!

Nicely done. I've been a TO fan ever since I played Knight of Lodis. Speaking of that game, is there any chance that you'll be writing for those characters?

Main: Alphonse Loeher (becomes Laans Tartare in Let Us Cling after the death/sacrifice of Eleanor in one of the 3 possible endings. Surprisingly, though it stuffs up the canon, the best ending is with Alphonse and Eleanor disappearing from the chronicles forever, seemingly to live happily ever after.)

Romantic Interest:Eleanor Olato

Overall Villain: The Fallen Angel Shaher

You you could probably to do a nice tragic haiku with Shaher.

Ah well, I really like this collection...

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