WOAH! O_o This is SO wonderful! FANTASTIC job! Keep writing, please! Heehee, you got loads of talent _ And also, you can always write a fanfic of how Squall and Seifer become friends or something like that (not GAY though, thats disgusting X_x). It would be so cool, you know? To have those 2 long time rivals befriend each other like that. Hope to see more from you soon!

*Squall's angel*

Beautiful, makes me wanna cry. ;_;

Ah, lovely.

Boy, you sure do know how to write! You do so well on the characterizations of people, even when they are children. :) Awesome fanfic, Astarte, but as if you'd write anything else. :-)

Whoa, that was great. It was well written and thought-provoking. Keep on writing!

Wow...I love this. You really captured Seifer with this, and showed truth where others have trouble showing it. He happens to be my favorite character, so I love reading anything about him. Still...the reasons behind teasing Zell, being the shadow and reflection of Squall...it's perfect. That's the truest thing of all, you know. They are mirror images of each other. Exactly the same and completely different.