|Reviews for Mistake|
| heavenlydragan 5/29/11 . chapter 1
Matt is not happy at all... DU DU DU DUN!
| BigTimeGleekBTR 11/30/10 . chapter 1
Loved It! :D
| CinemaPriate 11/26/10 . chapter 1
Brilliant! I like how you're not afraid to have emotional hurt in your stories!
I also like the part where you have Matt in the background!
| Rosalind du Coudray 10/1/10 . chapter 1
Mwahahahaha! I hope Matt feels like a jerk now.
| thecritic 8/24/10 . chapter 1
DayDreamer9 put it well. It would be out of character for Matt to treat Will the way that he has in your oneshots. The same goes for Irma and Cornelia. Their characterizations are tainted and inaccurate. Matt, Irma and Cornelia would realize that Will didn't mean to strike Caleb and they would continue to treat her normally.
The villain's dialogue is trite, the battle is vague (you neglected to mention how it started and didn't provide the reader with any reasonable context for the scenario) and your OC, Angelo, is a Gary Stu. Where do you get off pairing him with almost every female character in the show?
| The Duelist of Dawn 8/20/10 . chapter 1
Man, one false shot and everybody's trippin'. At least Will's got somebody...
Good start, on to the next story!
| SilverShadow65 8/16/10 . chapter 1
Wow that was intense. I really liked that. I thought you matched the character's personalities perfectly. Can't wait for the sequel
| ThePink1 at Reefside.Net 8/16/10 . chapter 1
"Wow, somebody's on a roll, huh, Will?" Hay asked. "Will?" she repeated, after getting no response.
"Huh? Oh ... yeah ..."
"'samattah, Willie?" Hay Lin asked quietly, laying a hand on Will's shoulder.
"I ... it's just ... All these stories about Matt and me having troubles ..." Will sighed.
"Are they true?"
"Well, the reasons're our own, but ... yeah ..." Hay pulled her red-haired friend in for a consoling hug as Will sobbed.
"Poor Willie," she said softly.
"Why do you keep calling me that?" Will sniffled into her shoulder.
"Well, everybody else has a funny nickname, I though you could use one, too," Hay grinned. Will snorted, laughing in spite of herself.
"At least it's better than Corny ... Thanks, Hay-hay." The two smiled at each other, and turned back to review with lighter hearts.
Nice one-shot-prequel-first chapter-whatever, Lexvan. We'll be eagerly awaiting the next one, so ... Catch ya on the flipside, A J.
| DayDreamer9 8/15/10 . chapter 1
It's pretty well-written, but even if they broke up, unless it was ugly, I doubt that Matt would be so cold to Will. Irma was a little OOC; she's Will's best friend in the TV series out of the five and always has her back. And near the end, you forgot that Taranee and Hay Lin were in the middle ground, why didn't they try to difuse the situation? But The Oracle and Halinor were accurate, but this is still pretty good and I'd like to see the sequel.
| Sportsman 8/15/10 . chapter 1
Another Nerissa in the making? Are they serious? Do they NOT know what an accident or a mistake is? It would serve them right if she decided to quit. At least Angelo was there for her.
Will the sequel be another one-shot? I figured that since this was a one-shot story, then the sequel should be a one-shot also.
| Kalims 8/15/10 . chapter 1
One hell of a great one-shot! It's a one of a kind to say the least,Will never hurt one of her friends (I know it was an accident) Wow,she has all the right to feel guilty and upset,especially after what the others said. And does Matt think he has the right to glare at Will and Angeo? If he really wanted her back,he would had her back and stood by her side! I guess there's going to be a lot of action in the sequel..I can't wait!
| Lucky OCB 8/14/10 . chapter 1
Aww. Poor Matt.
- Olivia ( Lucky OCB )