This looks like, even from only one chapter, it's going to be a neat story. Please, please continue!

This is very interesting, but it's too short. Please update soon. I'd like to see where this leads. I'll read more if you write.

It's okay, but extremely short.

Ummm... are you ever going to continue? Or will I have to write my own Hirogen fic? They are just too cool!

i like the fan fic. i also read the novel and thot it was really good. i liked barkley er fluffy or whatever the hck his name was