Okay, wow. This may get long, so sorry in advance :)

First off. I love how you kept putting tooth references. I find it incredibly amusing. Nice touch.

Second, the image of a half naked Tweek, hands tied behind his back and bent over is a very beautiful one, and I can almost guarantee that it won't be getting out of my head for a while. I find it to be amusing that Craig has a roll of duct-tape, and the comment you added really did make it funnier.

I also like how you didn't make Tweek to spazzy. I enjoy stories where he's a bit more dominant (but Craig always tops) but is still Tweek and in character. I think that the way you set him up and displayed him shows a much better image than the way most people do (weak, spazzy, twitchy and annoying)

The end bit, was really good too. Normally, people have a long bit at the en where they chill after sex. Of course, you did, but not as much. They were just going for a long while, and that's good. There was a lot of humor at the end, but also, you know, porny. I found it comical how you added just how much they have sex, and it honestly made them seem like sex-crazed maniacs.

It's a really good image that you had at the end, something that seems like good time and a lot of effort were put into it, not just random porn that people write so others can get off to it.

I only wrote this much because I really like this, not just the plot and the sex, but the way it was written. And honestly, I don't read that many good, quality stories like this one. I do understand and like the tooth explanation you gave Craig, because I am, quite frankly, like him.

I do hope that you end up writing more Creek porn, because it does seem to fit, the way you write it. And as I said, sorry for writing so much! :3

I just...died. Like, there is so much blood...running down my throat. And I'm sure it would be flowing out of my nose if I weren't currently laying down. . Craig is a pimp.

Ah, this was awesome, smexy, fabulous sauce! xD It was really smart to incorperate parts that came from the show, like the rubberbands- which was the ultimate nostalgic romantic sorta thing that I love to see.

I'd say this one was a little close to home with me, with Craig not wanting to smile and all. So it really touched my heart that even though Craig's teeth weren't perfect, Tweek still wanted him and perhaps wanted him even more because of his imperfections. I really love that, that's the kind of stuff true love's about.

I was looking for that kind of fanfic. The scene when Craig put his fingers into the Tweek's mouth was so damn erotic :D

oohhhmmmyyyyfuucckiiingggg.

that was freaking amazing. I loved it all. Craig's nickname for Tweek, the safe word, the rubber band ball...
omg. the fuckingg rubber band ball. /hearts.

that was lovely. i love you.

- I love it when fanfics use canon pieces in them.

this is actually sweet in a...weird way XD

awesomo

Baww this was all of adorable, hot and hilarious. Definately one of the best Creek fics I've read in a while! XD

HAMMERTIME.

Wasn't quite sure what to expect but I ended up liking it a lot! The lemon was well done too!

Oh my god. I read Craig nickname for tweek and jst started grinning at the computer screen like an idiot. I absolutly LOVE that nickname and say we make it a tradiotion. This was really well written and a wonderful read. THANK YOU!

I was SO happy to come home from camping to see this. There were about a billion fun things on the internet awaiting me when I returned back to civilization, and I'm SO GLAD this was one of them LOL 8)

Like I said, I take delight in some of the silliest of things, so I'm going to be ASLDKASJ-ing about basically those things HAHA and there were so many little details in here, I felt like you were both catering to people who delight in the lemon and people like me who delight in everything else LOL and even the people who delight in both, so that was just perfect }D

although I will say that the way you write your porn-anatomically-is probably better than I could've LOL actually, everything anatomical in here was pretty impressive (and I'm talkin teeth, here, man, I was like, "wow, I don't know what the hell half of these words are referring to omg i didn't know they had SO MANY NAMES.") SO A FOR THAT.

(I want to quote things again because it just makes me life easier than describing things LOL)

"Tweek didn't speak. He kept his teeth exposed.

"Don't move," Craig ordered, as he slithered out of the bathroom to the kitchen area of the apartment. He then poked his head back in with a quick, "You can close your mouth now."

Tweek closed his lips together with a breath of relief."

WHYYYY so cute, Tweek ;3; I just picture him in my head doing these things and I squeal in happiness, and I just want to abduct him AHHH Craig I will knock your fucked ass teeth out, I want this boy all to myself aldkjslfdkj he's just so precious omggg /wibblewibble

umm every single time Craig said "show me your teeth" i thought was quite sexy lolz idk I find the sexy in subtle things like that, but anyway, out of all of the moments he uttered it, the third (?) time he does it, when he says it "above a whisper" and he's got his hands on Tweek's face, and you can't tell whether he's just saying it to actually LOOK at his teeth or he's got something else in mind-that borderline between whether this is an innocent or dirtier statement, that's just SO perfect hggnnhhh i love eet.

"He had always had a roll of duct tape prepared - just in case, you know, he had to tape some asshat to a bench for whatever reason"

LOL oh craig. don't ever change.

"Tweek was squirming on the bed like some sort of excited worm. Seeing Craig just, just standing there, he knew he had to get over there somehow, and his wobbling wasn't helping anyone at the moment. Unable to get to his feet, he resorted to rolling. He only rolled once or twice before he hit the carpeted floor with a thud, sending an cocky smirk to Craig's face."

SO CUTE. SOO SO CUTE. see it's kind of funny because not only is he being restrained by his wrists via duct tape, but he's also about to go drag himself painfully over to go blow Craig...but the next moment is ruined for me because I'm still sitting here COOING at the image of tweek rolling around on the bed like a worm. and then falling off. it's just. so precious. laksdj tweek omg let's just get married okay i will make you very happy ;3;

another thing I really love is those small snippets of dialogue between them (it makes me really want another chapter of houseflies from you, hopefully so I get to see more of this?) especially parts like

"untie me! I wanna touch you!"

"what's the safe word?"

"IDK!"

"WELL TOUGH BEANS" (I am paraphrasing)

and

"turn over."

"now?"

"no, tomorrow. YES NOW."

and... (direct quoting now)

"Just..." Tweek's eyes were shut tight. "Don't kill me."

"When have I ever?"

And at Tweek's request, he did not kill him.

just.. I love Craig's snark. it makes me happy. And Tweek's...Tweekiness. I love the way they interact verbally like that. and OH my god, my favorite is probably the hammertime part : not only because hammertime is just OMG SO HILARIOUS LMAO but um just the way you built up to that. Like how Craig starts singing it? and how Tweek struggles through the song (like in the show! ;3;) and craig just sits there amused by this display? and even the little golf clap at the end? SO CUTE. I LOVE THEM SO MUCH. ;3; it's just so wonderful, it makes me a little weepy with the happy LOL ohh and macchiato as a nickname for Tweek officially wins EVERYTHING. I want to steal this. IT'S SO PERFECT. it should be canon. it makes more sense than any other stupid nickname this frikkin fandom has had Craig give him. it's adorable ;3;

oh and then there was this big chunky paragraph that spoke to me on a thousand levels of love...

"There was, also, a rubberband ball in the drawer of junk - it was one they had spent years making in their childhood. Now, in their adulthood, Craig took it upon himself to take off one rubberband each time they made love (even though it stung his insides to call it "making love"). It was a thick layer, the one that clutched the bedpost. They could no longer count the bands. And the ball was noticeably smaller, but for weeks, it hadn't been touched."

SEE this is one of those big things of text that I just had to quote. At first I had copy/pasted the first sentence and then I kept reading and realized the whole paragraph made me happy. First of all, the two of them making a rubberband ball as kids and then keeping it? that's SO fucking adorable, it hurts. it's just the kind of stupid precious innocent kid love that I adore so much. (also, I liked how you tied that to canon, very nice 8D) And I like that they kept it and then morphed the use of it. Like, it still continues to mean something to them, even as adults. The fact alone that they found a purpose for it later in life is adorable enough, but...the fact that they take a band off every time they have sex... Idk, that's just SO FREAKIN ADORABLE to me. like every time they have sex, it actually means something? idk that's what it says to me LOL maybe I'm reading into this too much. I even like the fact that you mention the ball is getting smaller and smaller, details like that... it's very... "show don't tell" about their relationship. like you speak volumes about these two and their relationship, from beginning to now, just in this paragraph alone. IT'S SO COOL AND AWESOME.

also I love that Craig hates calling it "making love"; I'm not 100 percent certain what this could be taken to mean-I saw it as Craig simply disliking using that phrase (which is so adorable and in character omg Craig I will marry you, as well)- but then I read it again and I thought about how apparently your break-up fic takes place after this one, so I was thinking maybe he hates calling it "making love" because he doesn't see it as such? in like, a sad way? which I think is pretty interesting, too.

hhngghh sorry I love reading into stuff idek what I'm talking about half the time lol

ANYWAY uhh so I loved so many of the little details in this. Details really get me, I love them like a fat kid loves cake, so this had me rolling with delight. YOU NEVER FAIL TO DISAPPOINT, MY DEAR, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ;D

Guhhhhhhhhhhhhh. That's all I can say, because I love this.

They're both just so IC and God, I can't describe how awesome this is, 'cause it is. And I'm stupid 'cause all I can say is THIS IS AWESOME YEAH, YEAH, HURRRR, but you know, it is, so yeah. Yeah. C:

BUT ANYWAY. Write moar. Because I said so. C:

That was really good. I loved it. I know I'm too young to be reading this type of stuff but I can't resist! Too smexy! XD

Oh that was all kinds of delightful. Funny, sexy as all hell and just...mm. You write Craig and Tweek in a wonderful way. I think that "macchiato" nickname is my new favorite thing about this pairing.