Your style of writing is awesome. It's really original, and unpredictable. This was an incredible story.

this is great, but is this the end?

This one was great. :)

Awesome story, completely captured my attention! I love your style, so please write more!

lol...no worries. Now I'm guessing that this paragraph stuffs doesn work, eh? Lol...jus' wanted to say. Sorry. Good story! -*

Hey! Hey, don't be so quick t' give wolves a bum rap, okay?

Anyway, your story was facinating. It kept me guessing, which I guess was your intent. Nice job. (Might want t' remove the HTML tags, though. No offence.)

Very impressive, I must admit. At first it seemed a little awkward, but that's just me. You've done an excellent job with this story! I look forward to any writings you may have planned for the future!

Another happy Ashley/Andros! (happy squeal) You're the best!