want more!

Very sweet interaction, and very believable regarding the characters. Nice one.

Yay! a wonderful story!

good fic. it was very good, although it did end at a cliffhanger...

peace out and write on,

darkgemwildcat

Wow...just..wow

You really are very, very good. I hope you write a few more stories for this archive. You're certainly enriching it.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.

P.S. Your profile picture, what is it from? I feel like I've seen it before.

Oh, I'm really enjoying this and looking forward to more *poke, prod*

I think you have Becky's voice down very well, making her a bit more likable than she was in the movie (don't get me wrong... I liked her there, but I felt she was a little less necessary than the movie seemed to imply). Your voice for Veronica is great as well.

And, being a Balthazar obsessive myself, well, I really do adore your descriptions of Balthazar from the eyes of both women. And I hope to hear more of that. Especially his intensity, love, devotion, and occasional moments of humor. (yeah... I'm a sucker for that stuff, and with small little comments, you really highlighted all of that well).

Great job.

Sirius

i was happy to see a new mail from Jedi Buttercup. Didn't know what to expect when i saw a new story but i like it so far :-D is this story going to be complete Becky and Veronica orientated? or will it like switch around between the 4 main chars?

Greets

Awesome fic!