Oldest ever completed fic. Although it is a oneshot, so yeah...

*sobs* THSI WAS SO SAD! ITS JUST LIEK TEH HSOW! TEH TWERPS DIDN'T EVEN GET HURTAT ALL WAHAHAHAAAAAA! *blows nose*

Dat was soooooo great! It's da best Pokemon story I've read so far. You kept da characters in character too! Write more!

The html needs work, but not a bad idea.

GAHHH! I just looked back on this, and realized the HTML is all screwed, and the entire thing is jumbled into one giant paragrah!

Argh... why do things go wrong?

Hey gang, this isn't a review, but I wanted to say that I fixed this story, so it's not in one giant paragraph anymore!

That was kinda funny. Do another one.