 snapespook 4/14/03 . chapter 1I very much dig the superb description of the power that a Malfoy commands, the air and granduer and sheer danger of them that no few words can truly express... my only negative comments lie in the area of why Snape would be with them, on Goyle's desire of all people, and also the fact that toward the end there were few to many "he"s involved for me to have a clear picture of what was going on at first. But in all, an incredible pervading essence.
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