Hmm, I don't think it's really that M, maybe more like on the higher end of the T spectrum. Either way, it's still a good story and could easily be called the unofficial prequel to the series.

Good story. Decently well written, though it feels a little forced here and there, it's still interesting. The way it plays out kinda reminds of that 100 chapter monster written by Cevn (or whatever the name is).

Anyway, I can easily see how Belldandy might end up that way. Good job writing her, by the way. Though it's not quite clear how much time has passed (unless I missed something), it would most likely have to be quite a bit to change her that dramatically.

Anyway, good story, you should write more for AMG.

Well, well, that's a deep story. I wish I could think of things like that, but as they say, "To each his own." Congrats on a good story. Hope you feel inspired to do another.

Sorry, but Gungnir was never used in the Lord of Terror story arc! The Almighty used his own personal power to try to defeat the possessed Keiichi, which Belldandy was easily able to prevent. This was not the case when Gungnir was used against Celestine in the movie. Yes, Belldandy managed to hold it back for a moment, but it took her power combined with Celestine's to dissipate Gungnir.

I just wanted to say please hurry with the rest.

How soon are you releacing the next chapter? i love this!, a pint size Skuld lol

This is GOOD!

Keiichi is my fav charter in "oh my goddes" but i think it is interesting to see Bellandys reaction if he would die, and i think you did pretty damn good job with it.

UPDATE as soon as you can.

Augh! Your author's comments and the disclaimer were half of the entire page! Good writing though, but make sure to continue it.