Write some more, please. It's a good story.

dumb idea

you should tell more about how they found out the condom broke... and other stuff like that!

u should definitely continue this it was hot!

That was really good, i really liked how you took into account each of their regular personalities except when Ben fingered Adrian. Even though Adrian said in the show that she had never seen Ben so loose before, i still believe he would have been a little more hesitant and shy about it. Also the teasing, playing with her breasts, i thought slightly out of character also. But otherwise a very good explantion as to what happened between Adrian and Ben!

definetly felt tht

Really good:)

im more of a ben and amy but this was good right more plz, do u write ben and amy we need more of them?

I loved it.

Write moree about this pair!